Songwriting


Excerpts from Elementary Students, Tanglewood Elementary School, South Glens Falls, NY

I really learned some things from you!  I didn't know I could write a song. I really didn't! You really brought out the creative person inside. - Your pal Pat

You helped me to feel my feelings. You made up songs that weren't only funny, but meant a lot to me.  - Your friend, Alison

Since you've been gone, I've thought alot about your songs.  Your wonderful songs will probably come in handy in my life. - Sincerely Brittany

"I will never forget this experience. You taught me it was O.K. to share my feelings and it was O.K. to do what I wanted to do in life. I used to be very shy to get up in front of the class.  After your speech I am still shy, but not as much as I was. - Amy

I really enjoyed the program you did with my class, and I've learned I do have some musical talent. Writing that song made me think that." - The kid with no some musical talent, Justin

I thought you were the best because I never heard someone tell a story with so much mush feeling and if I did that, I'd just be scared.  These were the first songs that made me laugh all day.  - Katy

I loved your songs. And some of the songs put a tear in my eye.  I hope we meet again, also. I'm putting all of my inside into this letter. - Joshua

I had a fun time with composting the meolodies. (actual spelling) - Matt

Excerpts from 7th Grade students' letters following a weeklong residency at Haverling Junior High School, Bath, NY

"It's like you opened a new book. I can write better, and it's because of you. Thank you so much."

"I really liked your work, and I'm sure others did, too! No offense, but you're different in a good way. There are not many people like you. Some activities we did started out weird, but kept me thinking. I also hope you can inspire more kids in the future like you did me and others in the class."

"You opened whole new doors filled with opportunities. The best news is that because of your example, I am determined to become a famous singer. I always knew I wanted to be a singer. I never really thought I could make it, but now I know I can. Thank you!"

"I really enjoyed your classes. The past couple of days, I always looked forward to your class. Singing and writing poems are a great passion of mine. These things are good ways to release my emotions. I was the one who said I wanted my dead sister back. I was the one who wrote: 'Sometimes I feel trapped, my mind is full of death and grey questions.' I feel I learned a lot from you and your classes; I hope you will come see us again."

"I loved listening to your songs. I really like the song about the boy. It really moved me; it almost brought tears to my eyes."

"I think I've looked deeper into writing since you've been here. Your work is excellent. Your songs are good, and best of all, the performance you gave us was wonderful. I can't wait until Senior High when I get to see you again."

"I want to thank you again. I accepted your assignment and started to write about Goblins, and it was FUN! I would like to give you a special thanks. I tried your idea about my sister, and now she leaves me alone. I wrote in silence for two whole hours! You've really made a difference in my life. You've made me very happy; I will never forget you."

"I am just writing to tell you how much I enjoyed meeting you and hearing your music. I think my favorite song was 'Is this another name for love?' I also liked the game where everyone adds a word to make a story. Last night I sat down and started writing. At first it made no sense at all, but as I continued, it started coming together. I am grateful you encouraged me to write. I really enjoyed meeting you."

"I really enjoyed the time you were here. Now I write what I feel; I don't write what people want to see or hear. Before you came to my 7th grade English class, I couldn't get my ideas out, but with that activity you had us do with the words on the board, you opened up my eyes to other ways to write. In a way, we have something in common. We both love to write. We both get ideas that just pop into our heads. All the activities we did were great. I especially liked when we did the triangle thing; that really gets your creative juices flowing. You have done so much for me by just giving me confidence I would never have had. Without you knowing, you made me even more happy to write. If only you could have stayed a little longer."

"I have had so much fun these few days. The reason was that you did some amazing activities and awesome songs. I also liked the way you got along with everybody. You looked real cool. If I had a chance to say that you could stay, I would have you stay for the rest of the year. The reason I liked you so much was because I did not like to write before. Now I just think about what you talked about and it helps."

"I really enjoyed your ideas. They were very deep thoughts. I love showing my thoughts on paper; it makes me feel better."

"I'm kind of shy answering questions that teachers ask in front of a lot of people. Now I can think about raising my hand normally. I think that you are a very talented guy."

"I really enjoyed your song 'I don't know.' It's pretty funny, but cuts to the chase. My best friends are writing more than ever, and I wrote my most favorite poem of all."

"I really enjoyed your visit. You taught me how to express my feelings on a sheet of paper and into a song. I wrote five emotional, really good songs since Monday. It is a sport! A good sport. I like your talent. I liked your song 'Veggie Blues.' It's cool."

"I think that all of your words are very strong. I fact, I think you are very smart and brave to go to a lot of places and sing in front of everybody. I liked the dolphin song and the dog song. I think you should do a song on cats."


Jay Mankita presents interactive writing workshops tailored to any grade, including college level. From 10 minute classroom visits to residencies lasting a week or longer, Jay engages students through demonstration, discussion, and songwriting practice.

Philosophy
By approaching creativity with our whole body, 'listening' with all our senses, and practicing techniques which utilize both halves of our brain, we can deepen our access to, and take more responsibility for our own creativity.  These practices can also enrich our understanding and appreciation for the creativity of others.

Synopsis
In a classroom setting, students learn and practice body-centered writing and presentation, through demonstration, exercise, and discussion.  Workshops are fast paced and humorous, featuring techniques which allow for individual expression within a cooperative group setting. 

In these process-oriented sessions, though short-term goals are reached for, we focus on the 'reaching for,' rather than on the goal. Question and answer periods allow the students to learn more about a performing artist as role model -- someone who enjoys his work, and whose work is informed by a positive, ethical perspective.

Classes are designed and tailored individually, based on age of students, size of groups, and student population.  Pre-residency teacher guides are provided.  Workshops stand on their own, but can be easily integrated with almost any curriculum.

Purpose
Inspire students to create their own works, both during and after the workshop.
Encourage enjoyment, excitement, and self-confidence about writing and creativity in general.
Provide easy, practical methods for accessing a deeper, richer use of language. 
Demonstrate successful songwriting, poetry, and storytelling by presenting my own and others' work.
Present  a positive role-model as both a creative writer and a workshop leader.


Some recent thoughts on poetry.

Poetry is one way to express truth through beauty.  Words can awaken what lies beneath words. A poem is a dance of beauty between chaos and order.
Rhyme, rhythm, and alliteration are tools which encourage young writers to explore and experiment with language. They speak to the logical mind by ordering information into discrete and predictable packages, while awakening the non-logical mind with whimsy and play. Encouraging students to learn the rules of writing may help them later to  break them better.

In poetry, we see reflections of our own strengths and weaknesses.  I respond to your poem diferently if it reflects my own qualities. A poem's perspective balances the personal with the universal.
Poetry offers children an opportunity to break new ground and discover truths they've known all along. Poetry moves us between our inside and our outside worlds, between what we know, and what we dream.

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